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The chart below shows the waste disposal in one European country in four years 2005, 2006, 2007 and 2008.

主體段分段方法：按照【時(shí)間】分段

主體1：2005年

主體2：2005~2008年

開(kāi)頭段

The bar chart illustrates changes in the average amount of waste disposed of by three methods (landfilling, incineration and ocean dumping) in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

概述段

Overall, the three ways of disposalexperienced distinct trends, with landfillingexhibiting the most notable change.Meanwhile,compared withthe other two solutions, marine dumpingremained the least commonly used methodthroughout the given period.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 三種方式的數(shù)據(jù)變化趨勢(shì)不同，landfilling幅度最顯著

- 和其他兩種方式相比，dumping at sea數(shù)值一直較低

Body paragraph 1

In 2005, 1800 million tonnes of waste were buried underground, making landfillingthe predominant disposal method.In contrast, incineration treated just 500 million tonnes of waste,slightly less thanocean dumping, which handled 600 million tonnes.

思路要點(diǎn)：2005年

- landfill數(shù)值最高(1800 million tonnes)

- burning數(shù)值最低(500million tonnes)，略低于dumping at sea(800 million tonnes)

Body paragraph 2

In the subsequent years, land burialunderwent a consistent decline, dropping sharply to600 million tonnes in 2008.Conversely, the amount of waste treated through burningalmost doubled, reaching900 million tonnes by 2008.This increase allowed incineration tosurpassthe other two options, making itthe most widely used disposal methodby the end of the period.In addition,despitea minor rise to650 million tonnes in 2006,there was a gradual decrease inthe figure for marine discharge to 550 million tonnes in 2008, making itthe least utilized choice.

思路要點(diǎn)：2005 年~ 2008年

- landfilling：持續(xù)下降，到2008年顯著下降到600million tonnes

- burning：顯著上升，超過(guò)其他兩者數(shù)據(jù)，到2008年數(shù)值三者中最高，翻了兩倍多，達(dá)到900 million tonnes

- dumping at sea：2005-2006年小幅度上升到峰值650 million tonnes→到2008年持續(xù)下降達(dá)到550million tonnes, 數(shù)值三者中最低

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